An Alternative Explanation
Entry by: Keoghser
17th March 2017
An Alternative Explanation
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An alternative explanation to the reality I find myself in is I'm not really in a PSYCH ward, I'cm not really locked up, I'm not really unfree, unliberated,unjustly altered in such a way as to make me comply with their orders. Unseen, unspoken, undressed, unheard.
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I remember the weekend before my admission do clearly, I was so close to the sun I needed sun glasses but the weather was so cold and there were no supplies in the house to the extent I needed snow boots. I ventured across my estate and found a local grocer open on a Sunday morning and thought
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Thank goodness for the natives and local produce, for I am a traveler a long way from home. On an alien spaceship, seeking life on another planet and finding that life originates on other planets much the same as it does on Earth.
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Only most people don't know they are traveling on an Earth shaped refugee ship. The war happened, we needed help to find new food and fuel sources and leave the planet. It happened. We left the planet.
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A hidden history lesson. The time travelers went back to communicate with God and this lifetime is what they came up with, this is what we have to deal with. , this reality, an alternative reality, a dystopian reality.
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Imagine the Creator of heaven and earth, making Universe Mark 2 last summer. Everything recreated the right way round in just a flash. Right last fall with the time ship landing in Barcelona, I was there, it really was an Amelia Earhart moment for me.
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The joining up of the world banks during a Virus event that nobody would mention. That event was the joined up thinking of a post Apocalyptic world with smart Artificial Intelligence that means for now, war is over, if you want it.
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It takes time for everyone in the world to figure the same thing out, but I figured it out, and I'm a still in the PSYCH ward. But at least I'm not dead, not like Frederick Nietzsche, in an alternate reality.
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An alternative explanation to the reality I find myself in is I'm not really in a PSYCH ward, I'cm not really locked up, I'm not really unfree, unliberated,unjustly altered in such a way as to make me comply with their orders. Unseen, unspoken, undressed, unheard.
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I remember the weekend before my admission do clearly, I was so close to the sun I needed sun glasses but the weather was so cold and there were no supplies in the house to the extent I needed snow boots. I ventured across my estate and found a local grocer open on a Sunday morning and thought
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Thank goodness for the natives and local produce, for I am a traveler a long way from home. On an alien spaceship, seeking life on another planet and finding that life originates on other planets much the same as it does on Earth.
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Only most people don't know they are traveling on an Earth shaped refugee ship. The war happened, we needed help to find new food and fuel sources and leave the planet. It happened. We left the planet.
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A hidden history lesson. The time travelers went back to communicate with God and this lifetime is what they came up with, this is what we have to deal with. , this reality, an alternative reality, a dystopian reality.
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Imagine the Creator of heaven and earth, making Universe Mark 2 last summer. Everything recreated the right way round in just a flash. Right last fall with the time ship landing in Barcelona, I was there, it really was an Amelia Earhart moment for me.
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The joining up of the world banks during a Virus event that nobody would mention. That event was the joined up thinking of a post Apocalyptic world with smart Artificial Intelligence that means for now, war is over, if you want it.
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It takes time for everyone in the world to figure the same thing out, but I figured it out, and I'm a still in the PSYCH ward. But at least I'm not dead, not like Frederick Nietzsche, in an alternate reality.
Feedback: Average score: 315 (63%)
Marker comments:
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- What I liked about this piece: The way it unfolded, leaving you unsure if this was an unreliable narrator or a truth speaker was well done.
- Favourite sentence: The time travelers went back to communicate with God and this lifetime is what they came up with, this is what we have to deal with. , this reality, an alternative reality, a dystopian reality.
- Feedback: I feel like I missed something in the paragraph numbering, there was obviously a relevance but I didn't catch it - sorry.
I liked the idea behind this, the idea that a 'madman' may be a truth seeker - or not. I think it's well worth developing outside Hour of Writes with more time to get the nuances.
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