Who Are You?

Entry by: Susy

3rd December 2014

Who Am I?
I am gossamer, wafting through the azure.
I am wind tugging playfully at the petticoats of your dreams.
I am water tripping over mossy stones, laughing at the sun tickling my back.
I am moon, moody and deep with longing.
I am breath laden with the senses of the earth.
Love me, for I am Life.

Marker 1

What I liked about this piece: Loved it all!

Had to learn a new word - gossamer - great!

Made me smile and feel joyous!
Favourite sentence: I am water tripping over mossy stones, laughing at the sun tickling my back.
Feedback: I just loved it - there is nothing I would want any different!

Marker 2

What I liked about this piece: simplicity
Favourite sentence: I am breath laden with the senses of the earth
Feedback: dive deeper

Marker 3

What I liked about this piece: Lovely evocative language
Favourite sentence: 'I am water tripping over mossy stones, laughing at the sun tickling my back.'
Feedback: It's nice and whimsical, and makes one think of nostalgic times when there wasn't a constant knowledge of bad news pervading everything.